Grams Character Profile

Description

She has grey hair with pale blue eyes, and a heart-shaped face. She’s seventy-seven, five-foot two, and ninety pounds. Her full name is Helena Troy Ziglar-Aurum, and she’s the richest woman in the world, owing to her being the oldest of the Ziglar children and heiress to the Cadmus fortune.  She has a hunch due to having polio as a child.

Personality

 She’s fiercely protective of her loved ones but has a legendary temper and will hold grudges for years. Old-school and no-nonsense, she says what’s on her mind with little regard for people’s feeling. When she was younger, she was a big tomboy, preferring climbing trees and going hunting to playing dolls and having tea parties. She’s also a reformed racist and tries to keep up with current events like LGBTQ+ rights and BLM.

Likes

She likes her mystery novels and watching movies from her childhood on the Classic Movie Channel. She’s also fond of horses and has several on the Aurum Estate, along with a few pugs and cockatoos to keep her company. Helena is passionate about helping others and attends several charity events each month, and when not doing that, she plays bridge with her friends and takes salsa lessons on the weekends. She also knits and crochets clothes for her family and friends Her favorite person in the world is Travis.

Dislikes

Helena hates rude people and people who think they’re better than everyone just because they’re wealthy. She also has a long-standing feud with Travis’s mother, her daughter and only child, and their fights are epic. She also hates how Travis’s parents treat him and how they allowed the DMRC to experiment on him.  Her biggest pet peeve is fake people who only act nice to her because of her vast fortune.

Goals

Helena’s primary goal is enjoying her golden years and using her money to do the greatest good. Second, she wants to spend time with her loved ones, such as her great nephew Austin and grandson Travis. She also wants to find a suitable successor to run her businesses until Travis comes of age to assume control of them.

Desires

 Helena wants to undo all the evil her husband and his friends have caused over the years. She also wants Travis to use his powers for good.

Fears

 She fears not having enough time with her loved ones and not being able to counteract her husband’s evildoings. Helena also fears whomever she chooses as her successor will use their wealth and power for nefarious means and all the work she did will be for naught.

 Morality/ Religious Belief

 Morally, she’s chaotic good and follows her own code of conduct with little regard for what the law says. Religiously, she’s Protestant and goes to church several times a week. She’s very serious about her faith.

Political Alignment

Helena is an east coast liberal elite who favors libertarian values like individualism and freedom of choice and association.

Conclusion

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Character Profile: Oblivion

Description: Oblivion’s true form would drive people mad if they glimpsed it, so he often appears to Travis either as him with all his color drained or a giant, seven-headed, red dragon. He is ageless, having existed since before the universe began.

 Personality:  He is a bit of a curmudgeon, snobbish, and haute. He has a superiority complex and is quick to anger when he feels slighted. He’s also a Machiavellian chess master, often bending the truth or outright lying to turn people to his side.

Likes:  He likes powers, control, and sowing seeds of chaos and doubt in the minds of other. He delights in turning people’s soul evil and causing strife.

Dislikes:  Oblivion hates being imprisoned in the Nullverse and being made to feel impotent. He also dislikes being disrespected by his inferiors, and having his time wasted.

Goals:  His primary goal is getting Travis to fulfill his destiny, so that he will be free of the Nullverse. Second, is exacting revenge on those who exiled him to the Nullverse. And in general, he wants to gather as many souls as possible by corrupting them through their dreams.

Desires:  Oblivion desires power, and the freedom that comes with it, above all else.

Fears:  He fears being powerless and never being free from the Nullverse.

Morality/ Religious Beliefs: Oblivion is chaotic evil, beholden to no laws or moral code, only caring about himself and causing as much pain and suffering as he can. The only thing he values is power, believing it is the destiny of the strong to prey upon the weak.

 Political Alignment: He is an authoritarian, believing might makes rights and has no scruples about using any method to achieve his goals.         

Review: I Wish You All the Best

I Wish You All the Best by Mason Deaver

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I Wish You All the Best, by Mason Deaver, is a YA contemporary romance and coming of age novel about Ben De Backer, a high school senior who is nonbinary and uses they/them pronouns.
After coming out to their parents, they are kicked out in the middle of winter and go to live with their older sister Hanna and her husband Thomas.

At Ben’s new school they are befriend by Nathan Allen, and they soon develop feelings for him. However, Ben isn’t out to Nathan or anyone else at school.

I loved this book, and though I’m cis, Ben’s journey to accepting their self and dealing with their anxiety, depression, and issues of self love and self worth resonated with me as I’ve struggled with those issues too.

Also, the way they overthought things, were super self conscious, and how they expected the worst gave me flashbacks of my teen years.

I loved the voice in this; it was as though Ben was telling it right to me. But have a few issues. I found some of Ben’s actions stupid/borderline selfish such as how they resented Hanna for abandoning them when she left home or how they didn’t tell her about the message from their mom and their meeting with their parents.

Also, I felt Nathan’s character did veer into manic pixie dream boy and magical negro territory at times. Nathan spends the bulk of the book trying to get Ben out of his shell and being his emotional support. Aside from his being comedic relief, hot, and liking books (which he’s never shown reading), there isn’t much to his character. And most of the other characters get the same superficial treatment. Besides Ben and Nathan, Mariam, Ben’s nonbinary Muslim vlogger friend, is the only character who’s given depth.

The ending also felt a bit rushed.

Overall, I did enjoy this book and highly recommend it. I give I Wish You All the Best four out of five stars.




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Review: The Taking of Jake Livingston

The Taking of Jake Livingston by Ryan Douglass

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


The Taking of Jake Livingston, by Ryan Douglass, is a YA horror novel that follows the eponymous Black, gay, teen medium as he attempts to stop Sawyer Doon, a school shooter turned vengeful ghost, from continuing his killing spree and possessing Jake.

Jake attends St. Clair Prep, a prestigious private school where he is one of only two Black students there and is often the target of racist comments and actions from students and teachers alike.
Jake lacks confidence in himself and rarely speaks up, the former of which Sawyer plays on to torment and possess him.

I connected with Jake’s selective mutism as I was bullied in school too and stopped speaking completely unless I was forced to talk by teachers.

Only by finding his voice and confidence in himself can Jake banish Sawyer for good.
I was on the fence about continuing this book after learning Sawyer was a POV character, and I could see how others would be put off by reading about a psychopathic killer who ultimately kills himself during his school shooting.

However, Douglass wrote Sawyer’s chapters in such a way to humanize him without condoning his actions or painting him in a sympathetic light.

Though, I think this book could have benefited from content warnings regarding scenes depicting the school shooting and a sexual assault later in the book.

Overall, I loved this book and devoured it in three days. All I have to say is wow and when’s the sequel coming out.

I Give The Taking of Jake Livingston five out of five stars. Definitely read this one.




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Review: Fifteen Hundred Miles from the Sun

Fifteen Hundred Miles from the Sun by Jonny Garza Villa

My rating: 5 of 5 stars


Fifteen Hundred Miles from the Sun, by Jonny Garza Villa, is a YA romance about Julian “Jules” Luna and Mat Pham, two high school senior boys who begin a long-distance relationship when Mat slides into Jules’s DMs after He gets drunk one night and comes out on social media
This book deals with toxic masculinity, domestic abuse, and general homophobia. Jules’s father forces him to go to a private Catholic prep school and beats him when he does anything that seems “gay”.
Over the course of the story, Jules finds the strength to stand up for himself against his father and the homophobic students at his school and live his best life.

I loved the voice in this. It was so conversational, and it felt like Jules was a friend telling you the story. It reminded me a lot of The Perks of Being a Wallflower, only gayer, more modern, and set in Texas.

Jules’s friends all seemed like real people, and I especially loved his friend Lou who stole the show in every scene they were in. His friend Jordan was also hilarious. However, I thought Jules’s older sister Xochi was a bit one note, and I thought she was little more than a plot device to move the story along.

Another thing I loved about this book is it addressed the issues queer people of color deal with, such as racism from white LGBTQ+ folks and queer phobia within communities of color.

Another issue I was surprised that this book tackled was how some nonblack people of color are racist towards Black people.

I also loved how Mat and Jules were both people of color. So often in YA romances you have a passive love interest of color paired with a white one. So, it was nice to see a brown queer couple in love and unapologetically embrace their cultures.

If I had one criticism, it’s that the ending felt a bit too Disney. But otherwise, I loved this book. Five out of five stars. I highly recommend you read this book like now!




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Character Profile Agent Anderson

Description

Agent Anderson is white and in his early thirties, with light-brown hair and blue eyes. He’s five-ten and 165 pounds. His full name is Thomas Anthony Anderson.

Personality

He has a geeky, raunchy sense of humor and is shy around women. He’s serious about his work and ambitious. When nervous he makes jokes.

Likes

He enjoys reading comics, working out, watching action movies and comedies, and playing video games. His favorite food is Swedish meatballs. He loves a good larger or IPA and is into microbrewery. He’s also a big NCAA basketball fan and tries to go to at least one Penn State game a year. He’s also big into classic rock.

Dislikes

He dislikes paperwork and doing assignments he feels are beneath him. Also, he hates egghead types because they make him feel insecure about his intelligence, and he doesn’t like being condescended to or treated like a kid just because he’s younger than most agents at the DMRC. He also hates how Kyle and the other Metahumans are treated but goes along with it to not rock the boat.

Goals

Agent Anderson’s primary goal is to facilitate the smooth extraction of Subject Prometheus, AKA Travis, and get a big promotion with a nice corner office and pay raise.

Second to this, he wants to find a way to improve the conditions of the Metahumans. However, his goals shift when he meets Travis. He decides to help Travis in the hopes he is the key to saving the other Metahumans.

Desires

As the middle child of five kids, Agent He wants to stand out and be recognized, which is why he accepted the DMRC’s offer to be a handler for metahumans. He wants to be the boss of his division, but he didn’t count on bonding with Kyle, Marie, Echo, and the others.

Now he wants to ensure they’re treated better and eventually allowed to go back to their families. He also wants to settle down and live that picket-fenced suburban life.

Fears

Agent Anderson fears being powerless to prevent the Metahumans from getting hurt, and what Travis is capable now that his powers have reactivated.

Morality/ Religious Beliefs

He is neutral good, doing what is asked of him by superiors, even if he doesn’t agree with them. But he will break the rules when he sees fit. Religiously, he’s a lapsed Catholic, but still says his Hail Marys and Our Fathers when he does or says something bad.

Political Alignment

He considers himself center right and has voted Republican every election since he was 18, though he doesn’t always agree with their platform on things like immigration or foreign policy.

Conclusion

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Character Profile Jenny Adams

Description

Jenny is white with hazel eyes, black hair, and large breasts. She is 32, five-foot-eight, and 175 pounds.

Personality

She is fiercely protective of those she cares about, is a big flirt, and takes her job as an RN seriously. She doesn’t mind working hard if the reward is worth it. She’s a bit of a tomboy owing to her having four older brothers. She can be a bit prissy, though. She’s also a hopeless romantic.

Likes

She’s fond of harlequin romances and paranormal romances a la Twilight, and shows like Friends, Gilmore Girls, and Girls.  Her favorite dish is biscuits and gravy, and her favorite drink is Jim Bean whiskey. She likes rom-coms, Korean dramas, and country music.

Dislikes

Jenny hates liars and cheaters and can’t stand people who take advantage of others. She also hates when doctors condescend to her like she’s dumb. She doesn’t like spicy food or take out, preferring to make her own meals. She also hates the attention she receives because of her breasts. She sees red when anyone messes with Travis.

Goals

Long term, Jenny wants to settle down, get married, and start a family. Short term, she wants to become head of St. Michael’s nursing department and use the pay rise to start saving for her wedding. Also, she wants to keep Travis safe no matter the cost to her.

Desires

Jenny desires to love and be loved. Ultimately, she wants to move to the country, buy a plot of land and use it to raise some chickens, rabbits, and goats. She also has dreams of starting her own line of artisanal sausages and cheeses. And she wants to start a free clinic for rural people.

Fears

Jenny fears not being good enough at her job and having to move back to Mobile, AL with her family. She’s also afraid of losing those close to her, especially Travis. And bugs creep her out.

Morality/Religious Beliefs

She is Lawful Good and follows rules even if she doesn’t always agree with them. Religiously, she is Southern Baptist.

Political Alignment

She is a centrist, conservative on some issues like gun control and abortion; and liberal on issues like LGBTQ+ rights, taxes, and freedom of speech.

Conclusion

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A Phoenix First Must Burn

A Phoenix First Must Burn by Patrice Caldwell

My rating: 4 of 5 stars



A Phoenix First Must Burn is an all-female anthology of Black speculative fiction comprised of sixteen stories that range from soldiers fighting space orcs to a girl who discovers she can freeze time.

This anthology remined me a lot of another one, A Universe of Wishes by the We Need Diverse Books organization, and it featured some of the same writers.

Overall, I liked these stories, but my top three favorites are: 3) All The Time in the World by Charlotte Nicole Davis, 2) Letting The Right One In by Patrice Caldwell, and 1) The Goddess Provides by LL McKinney.

All The Time in the World is written in second person POV and you assume the role of Jordan, a Black high schooler who develops time-freezing abilities after years of consuming water contaminated by a local chemical plant, that has hidden this fact until people developed sores, got sick, and died.

Letting The Right One In is a Sapphic romance about a vampire-obsessed Black girl who meets and falls for a Black female vampire.

The Goddess Provides is a high fantasy story about a princess who is hunted down for renouncing the tutelar Goddess after her mother dies suddenly from an illness. This gave me major Children of Blood and Bone vibes and I’m here for it; I’d love to read a novel-length manuscript of this story.

My only criticisms of this anthology are 1) I felt like many of the stories ended without a definitive climax, and 2) the lengths of the stories varied so much, leading to an uneven pace. But these issues weren’t enough to detract from my enjoyment of the book too much.

I give A Phoenix First Must Burn 4.5 out of 5 stars. Read this if you haven’t already!









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Prometheus Character Profile

Description

Pro is identical to Travis, save his lack of burn scars and green eyes instead of brown eyes.

Personality

Pro is cocky, brash, crude, and an all-around fuckboy. While he comes off as dumb, this belies his intelligence when it comes to fighting and fixing mechanical devices and vehicles. He is also impulsive, rarely thinking things through, preferring to go with his gut. 

Likes

Pro likes fast food, hard liquor, and easy women in that order. He also likes fighting and proving he’s the best at it. He a sneakerhead and is a fiend for Jordan’s. His favorite drink is Hennessey straight up paired with hot wings. He’s also free-spirited and loves having fun.

Dislikes

Pro hates being told what to do, especially when it interferes with his having fun. His not a fan of books and would rather watch TV. He also hates indecisiveness and planning things out. But he absolutely hates being stuck with Travis.

Goals

Pro’s number one goal is being rid of Travis. This is second only to him having fun.

Desires

Pro desires freedom and fun, and his greatest desire is being free of Travis

Fears

He fears being controlled and Travis going to the dark side. Also, that he’s too much like Travis.

Morality/ Religious Beliefs

Morally, Pro is Chaotic Good, doing what he feels is right regardless of the law and what society say. Religiously, he is Protestant but doesn’t take his faith seriously.

Political Alignment

Pro is libertarian, believing everyone should be able to do whatever they want.

Conclusion

Thanks for reading. Next week’s post will be on Jenny Adams, the nurse who’s taken care of Travis for years.

Character Profile: JJ Giovanni

Description

Joshua Joseph Giovanni, AKA “JJ” AKA “Josh” is fourteen, but short for his age, standing at four-foot eight- and-a-half inches and barely ninety pounds. He has curly reddish-orange hair, pale skin, china-doll features, and dark green eyes.

Personality

JJ is an ambivert, at home either in the thick of a party, or curled up reading comics. Generally, he’s cocky and crude around his friends, but shy around Travis. He’s secretly a big geek and loves ripping on hella bad sci-fi and horror movies.

He’s also into science and technology and smart in his own right, a fact he hides from most of his friends as he tends to play the class clown. He’s passionate about the causes he cares for, often to the point of obsessiveness. He’s an artist at heart and a hopeless romantic.

Likes

JJ likes crudes jokes, anime, comics, manga, video games, Kaiju, horror, sci-fi, and gangster movies, and writing poetry. He has a sweet tooth and stashes candy bars around his room. His favorite thing to read is online gay romance stories. He also likes edm, pop, alternative and some rap. His drink of choice is a screwdriver. But above all, he loves being the center of attention.

Dislikes

He hates being ignored or talked down to and being underestimated because of his size and age. He also hates how his parents constantly criticize him and put him under a ton of pressure. But most of all, JJ hates being excluded or made to feel like he doesn’t belong.

Goals

JJ just wants to make it to colleg,e so he can cut loose and do his own thing. As for what he wants to do with his life, he’s torn between standup comedy/writing or going into a STEM field to please his parents. Also, he high-key wants Travis to be his boyfriend.

Desires

JJ wants to be loved and valued for who he truly is and to find the guy who will love him unconditionally. He also wants a big family with tons of kids, grandkids, and pets. 

Fears

JJ’s greatest fear is that he isn’t worthy of love and that he’s destined to be alone. Thus, he’ll do whatever it takes to fit in, even if it means doing things he doesn’t agree with, like bullying Travis.

Morality/Religious Beliefs

Morally, JJ is Chaotic Good and will do what he thinks is right regardless of what others and the law says. He is Catholic and attends Mass every Sunday and takes his faith seriously. He believes god has a plan for him and is waiting to figure out what it is.

Political Alignment

Politically, JJ is very liberal, going as far as calling himself a social justice warrior. He tries to keep up with politically correct terms for marginalized groups and donates to several causes such as BLM, the ACLU, and Fight for $15. He also tries to use his privilege for good by engaging in online activism.

Conclusion

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Next week’s post will be on be on Pro, the entity with whom Travis shares his mind and body.

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Character Profile: Travis Turner

Description

Travis Marshall Percy-Newton Turner is 12-and-a-half years old, five-two, and 120 pounds. He has tightly coiled curly black hair, with dark brown eyes and skin. The right side of his face and body are covered in burned scars from a fire when he was younger, and he often wears hoodies to hide his face.

Personality

Travis has a dark, sarcastic, geeky sense of humor, and thinks he’s above everyone around him. A know-it-all, he has a massive superiority complex, and hates being viewed as weak or anything but the best at whatever he does. While outwardly stoic, he has anger problems, which becomes his greatest strength and his greatest weakness.

Likes

Travis likes reading books and learning in general, especially if it involves languages, science, or technology. He often takes electronics apart to figure out how they work and has been working on his robot Cha for the past year.

A gamer, he loves fighters, RPG’s, and puzzle/platformers.

He’s also big on gangster movies and bad sci-fi and horror movies.

Music-wise, he likes classical, rap, R&B, soul, Motown, but his favorite genres are Alternative and metal.

Travis also likes order and being in control and as such his room is always clean, with everything labeled and in its place.

When it comes to people, his social circle is small and he only considers Jenny Adams, the nurse who’s taken care of him for years, and his grandmother, Helena Aurum, worthy of his attention and affection.

However, that all changes when he and JJ start hanging out and Travis finds himself falling for the older boy, despite his protestations that love is an evolutionary joke, a trick of chemicals to compel the species to procreate.

Dislikes

He dislikes disorder, messes, surprises, being around a lot of people, and meeting many people at once. Travis also loathes small talk, celebrity and pop culture, stupidity, being vulnerable, and anything that makes him seem weak.

Goals

While still young, Travis knows he wants to do something with technology or electronics, such as becoming an electrical engineer, computer engineer, or programmer. His main goal right now is surviving the hell that is school until he’s old enough to take the GED and go off on his own. But when Oblivion reveals Travis is his vessel, prophesied to end the world, his goal shifts to mastering his powers and stopping the prophecy from coming true.   

Desires

On the surface Travis wants to be normal. But what he desires most is to be accepted for he truly is, to have a place where he can drop his guard and not worry about being strong all the time. Though he says otherwise, he does want friends, to love, and be loved.

Fears

Travis fears emotions and being rejected, so he suppresses the former and pushes everyone away when they get too close. He puts on an act like he doesn’t care what anyone thinks of him. But most of all he fears Oblivion is right about them being the same, and that he has no control over his destiny.

Morality/ Religious Belief

Morally speaking, Travis is Chaotic Neutral, following his own set of rules with little regard to whether his actions are good or evil, so long as they achieve his goals.

Religiously, he’s an atheist, staunch materialist, and Secular Humanist who believes this is the only world that exists and the only life we get, so we should make the best of it for ourselves and others.

Political Alignment

Raised in a working-class neighborhood, Travis leans liberal, believing the state has a role to play in government, but it shouldn’t be the answer to everything. And in general, it should keep its nose out of people’s business and let them do whatever they want if it doesn’t harm anyone.

Conclusion

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Review: Counting Down with You

Counting Down with You by Tashie Bhuiyan

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


Counting Down with You by Tashie Bhuiyan is a YA romance that deals with anxiety disorders and filial piety. Seventeen-year-old Karina Myra Ahmed tries to live up to her Bangladeshi parents’ high expectations, but she feels suffocated under all their rules, so when they take a month-long trip to Bangladesh, she decides to use their absence to cut loose.

Things are complicated when she’s forced to tutor bad-boy Alistair “Ace” Clyde, and he asks her to fake date him for three weeks. They catch feelings for each other and in the process learn to fight for themselves and what they want.

It took me a while to get into this book, but I’m glad I stuck with it; Ace and Karina are adorable together, and I was so rooting for them. But the other characters were a bit one-note, and I couldn’t stand her parents. They are the definition of toxic parents, and I wouldn’t blame Karina if she cuts contact with them once she goes to college.

Overall, I like this book, but it did have some issues. First, the overuse of adverbs led to a lot of telling. I’m talking at least once every page. That said, it didn’t detract from the story that much.

Second, as I mentioned above, aside from Ace and Karina, the characters were two-dimensional. But my favorite character Karina’s grandmother; she was so warm and understanding, like a comfy blanket.

My third issue was that neither Ace nor Karina grew a spine until after they got together. This is a pet peeve of mine; if you don’t care enough about yourself to fight for what you want, then why would you just because you’re in a relationship?

The ending was also a bit lackluster with the issue of whether Karina will tell her parents about Ace being left unresolved.

I did enjoy Karina’s poems and the build up of her relationship with Ace.

Overall, I give Counting Down with You 4.0 out of 5.0 stars and recommend it if you like diverse YA romances.




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Arcade Attack

Introduction

Welcome!

In this post I’ll talk about how video games have influenced me and the writing of Palingenesis, my dark fantasy/sci-fi debut YA novel, which releases September 1st.

Without further ado.

As a kid, I spent more time in the hospital than I did at home, fighting one respiratory infection after another. I also had asthma so severe I could only ride my bike up and down my block a few times before getting winded. So, video games became my thing and helped me cope with the isolation.

And since I had latest systems and games, our house was the go-to spot for  in our neighborhood. I sucked at most sports games, and still do, but could wreck most kids in fighting games, especially Street Fighter and Mortal Kombat.

I vividly remember I and the other kids in the neighborhood trying to figure out all the death moves while politicians debated over said graphic violence and whether it would lead to violence in real life.

Spoiler alert: it didn’t.

To this day, I’m extremely shy; but gaming helped me socialize. Even if it was a “sup?”, “hey” or “Mortal Kombat?” it got me to interact with kids and form friendships.

My cousin, brother, and I would game after school, and then I’d meet their friends and we’d trade games or have tournaments. Mind you, this was in the late ‘90s, so there was no online gaming yet.

Another fond memory of gaming I have is when we went to visit my mother’s family in northern Michigan, and I demolished my cousin Ryan in Tekken my first time playing it.

Things changed once broadband internet became popular in the early 2000s

Online Gaming

 Now that I wasn’t limited to the gamers in my neighborhood, I could have matches against people half-a-world away any time.

I liked the solo aspect of first-person shooters, but when I started playing MMORPGs like Matrix Online, and later Maple Story and World of Warcraft (WOW), it forced me to interact with people more as many of the missions required two or more players.

Then I discovered kongregate.com, a site where people could play and create games for others while socializing in chatrooms. I got to know several users over the years by frequenting the same chatrooms.

But I also learned that games are more than mere playthings; they can be art and teach you about storytelling at the same time.

Games as Teachers of Writing and Life

Games like God of War, WOW, Heavy Rain, and The Last of Us provide a cinematic experience.

In each case, the gameplay is complemented with a griping story.

 In the case of God of War, it’s spawned an ongoing franchise that’s due to the detail of its storytelling. From the opening sequence of the first game, with its somber narration, you know you’re in for a hell of a game. And with each sequel the lore and world is expanded.

Likewise, The Last of Us literally pulls you into the story by having you assume control of Joel during the opening level of the game. And the levels are designed such that you feel your characters anxiety when they crouch for cover to avoid enemies.

Moreover, Heavy Rain does this as well by putting you in control of Ethan Mars as he tries to locate his kidnapped son through a series of character interactions and puzzles that are structured like an interactive movie.

WOW also pulls you in from the start with a huge cinematic cutscene explaining the lore of the world.

Lesson 1: Engage Readers Immediately

One lesson I took from these games is to engage readers from the start. Backstory can wait. Make readers care about your protagonist and their world by making them wonder what happens next.

Lesson 2: The Stakes Must Matter

Another lesson these games taught me is to keep upping the tension and rewards, so people stay engaged. In each case, the enemies get harder and the amount of experience points to level up increases, but so do the power-ups and abilities.

For writing, I took this to mean making readers’ time worthwhile by giving them a story that’s both fun, raises the stakes, and doesn’t waste their time.

Lesson 3: Make the Experience Seamless

Another lesson I learned is to make the experience enjoyable. One of the things I hate about games is when the story rocks but the gameplay sucks or vice versa, ruining the experience.

The corollary in writing, then, is making sure your prose is readable, lively, and free of typos and grammatical errors, so readers aren’t jerked from the story by having to parse clunky sentences.

Lesson 4: Think Outside the Box

Games have also taught me how to improvise, adapt, and overcome issues. Often in games you must figure out puzzles or how to defeat a boss with little to no hints, and in games like Dark Souls and Bloodborne, they are notoriously difficult to beat.

But it can be done and the critical thinking and problem-solving skills these games and others require lend themselves well to writing, especially when it comes to fixing plot holes. There have been times I didn’t know how to fix a story, but by sticking with it and talking it out with myself, I solved the problem.

Lesson 5: View Stories as RPG’s

Four related traits from Role-Playing Games (RPG’s) that influence Palingenesis are nerfing, skill trees, cool down, and mana points.

I’ll discuss each in turn.

Nerfing refers to when the developers reduce the power of a class, skill, or item because it’s too powerful and breaks the game. As this applies to my story,when Travis exhausts his energy (mana points) he loses access to all his abilities until his energy has recharged by either eating or sleeping. And then his powered are weakened until his battery fully charges.

During this cool down period, he’s vulnerable and can be killed by standard weapons.

Like In WOW, all of Travis’s abilities use a specific amount of energy or mana points and he can’t use them without the exact amount of energy available, so he has to budget his energy.

Skill trees refer to the branching paths a player can unlock as their level increases. Generally, the farther down the skill tree, the more powerful the ability and the more skill points it costs.

Similarly, Travis’s powers start small (for him) and then increase as he grows stronger.

 To prevent him from being powerful enough to “break” the story, I created Zeno’s Battery, a paradox which states that the more powerful he becomes the larger his “battery” becomes and the longer his cool down period, meaning the cost for exhausting his energy becomes greater as time goes on.  

Lesson 6: Never Surrender

But the greatest lesson games have taught is to be perseverant. Many games require trial and error, especially those released before the internet and IGN were a thing. So, you had to figure things out by yourself, experimenting and refining your tactics until you beat the boss.

Writing is all about perseverance. Completing your first draft is just the first step to publication and you’ll need a second, third or more drafts to get your story right.

 Then there’s querying (if you got the traditional route) or hiring an editor and cover designer if you go the self-publishing route. In either case, you’re expected to do all the marketing for your book.         

Conclusion

Games have existed almost as long as storytelling, and the two have merged creating a new art form that can teach us much about life and being human, and it’s my hope the lessons they’ve taught me helped me make a kickass book for you.

Next week’s post will begin a series of character profiles, starting with Travis.

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And if you play Pokemon GO, my trainer code is: 4907 7550 5331

Life in the Mitten

Introduction

Welcome back. This post will deal with the setting of Palingenesis, namely life in Azure Plains, Michigan.

Michigan

Like many midwestern states, Michigan leans conservative and is a perennial swing state. However, large cities like Detroit and Ann Arbor are more liberal, and in the case of Ferndale, it’s very LGBTQ+ friendly.

But race relations have a long history of problems, be it cities that are highly segregated to this day, white flight from the inner city to the suburbs and country, and white supremacist activity in the state. As a general rule the farther from the metro-Detroit area you get, the less diverse and more conservative people get.

Weather

Given our proximity to Canada and the Great Lakes, Michigan is prone to wild weather swings; you can experience winter-link snowstorms in the morning, Spring showers in the afternoon, and sweltering Summer heat in the evening. Weather is often localized to the point that you drive through storms. And certain parts of the upper peninsula can get snow year-round. Tornados are also common, and every Michigander knows to go into their basement/lowest level of their house when a tornado watch is issued. We also know to prepare for prolonged power outages during the summer and winter months.

 All of which has prompted the saying, “If you don’t like the weather, wait five minutes.  

Traditions

Michigan is home to several annual traditions, such as going to cider mills every fall for hayrides, cider, and doughnuts; Traverse City’s cherry festival every July; and Motor City Pride every June. Detroit and Windsor also put on a joint firework display for the International Freedom Festival, an annual multi-day festival celebrating Canada Day and the Fourth of July. There’s also the annual jazz and techno festivals, and the Detroit Hoedown for country music fans. And every August classic cars parade along Woodward Avenue for the Woodward Dream Cruise.    

Food

Michigan is home to several immigrant populations, so we have a variety of foods to choose from. Hit up Hamtramck for Polish food. Craving middle eastern cuisine, then pop over to Dearborn and Dearborn Heights, home the country’s largest population of Middle Eastern folks.

Being majority black, Detroit is great for soul food and traditional American dishes like burgers, and you have to try our deep-dish pizza. You’ll also find Greek, Italian, Chinese, and Indian restaurants scattered across the Metro-Detroit areas. Uou’ll also find poutine and New York style delis.  

Overall, Travis Likes his home state, but not so much his city.

Azure Plains

Azure Plains, Michigan is a fictional Detroit suburb, and is an amalgamation of several such suburbs I’ve visited over the years. Like many Michigan suburbs, it’s segregated, with the well-to-do living on the east side of town in gated communities, while the working-poor and middle class live on the west side of town. Much as Eight Mile Road is the physical and psychological border separating Detroit from the northern suburbs, Woodward Avenue bisects Azure Plains into the haves and the have-nots. Travis’s neighborhood is on the edge of this border and Woodward Avenue runs right behind his two-story house.

The mayor of Azure Plains, Jasonda Pride, has been in office for two decades, largely from the wealthy side of town supporting her financially, allow her to crush anyone foolish enough to challenge her. All decisions about the town are made by a committee of concerned citizens, which is code for rich, bored housewives.

The city has a business district downtown, and the stores are a mix of boutiques, cafes, artisanal sandwich shops, and bars. And every year they have an art festival/ food festival called the Hardy Arty Party in the days leading up to The Woodward Dream Cruise. And for every major holiday they allow local children to decorate the shop fronts.

Every Christmas the local shops donate money to buy needy children toys, and every Halloween they pass out candy to kids as the business district turns into the Scream District, a massive, haunted house.   

Travis and others without cars get around via the SMART bus system and DDOT system, which connects Azure Plains to Flint to the northernmost, and downtown Detroit to the southernmost.  

Children in Azure Plains have few options for schools. The working class send their kids to Don Barton Elementary, Thurgood Marshall Middle School, and MLK Highschool. The rich send their children to Azure Plains Preparatory Academy, a K-12 charter school.

AP Prep

AP Prep, or APPA as the cool kids call it, is a multi-wing school sat on three acres of land. It has its own stadium for football, field hockey, lacrosse, and soccer matches, along with a regulation gym for basketball, wrestling, volleyball, and other indoor sports. While academics are preached about daily, Travis sees how the teachers fawn over athletes, and is infuriated when they get to set the curve.

The uniform at AP Prep is simple: A school blazer, dress shirt with optional tie, dress pants or khakis, with dress shoes. The uniforms alone often price out most people on Travis’s side of town. And even those who can afford them can’t pay the fees AP Prep charges for every little thing. And as such, Travis is one of twenty BIPOC students at the school.

The courses at AP Prep are on par with those taught at private schools, and the teachers are the best of the bunch, recruited in much the same way prospects for college sports are. As such, AP Prep’s graduation rate is 98% and their students have a college graduation rate of 85%

The teachers are hard on the students, save those on sports teams, and expect only the best from them. Of course, Travis thinks this is a load of crap, since he’s witnessed teachers “bump up” grades after said student’s parents donate to the school’s many extracurricular activities. The hypocrisy of it all is vomit inducing.  

Conclusion

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Palingenesis Cover Reveal

Welcome back!

Today’s post is a special one. After over a decade working off and on Palingenesis, I am proud to present the cover for it.

I’ve poured my heart and soul into this book and can’t wait for y’all to read it when it releases in September.

For the unaware, Palingenesis is the first in a YA dark fantasy/sci-fi series about a bullied Black boy who learns he’s evil’s chosen one and must fight the devil to protect the boy and world he loves.

Without further ado here’s the cover.

cover by Rocko Spigolon via reedsy.com

Here’s the blurb:

Hell has no fury like a seventh-grader scorned.

Twelve-year-old Travis Turner fought the devil and won . . . barely. But evil never dies, and now he must master his supernatural abilities before Oblivion grows strong enough to defeat him and jumpstart the apocalypse.

However, Travis’s powers cause genome instability, leaving him only months to live if it’s not reversed.

He’s resigned to dying, until JJ Giovanni, the cocky redhead who’s bullies him for years, befriends him.

As their relationship intensifies, so do Travis’s powers, until he’s called to a cave, where he learns truths that forever change him.

To save the people he loves, the world and himself, Travis must let go of all he knows and embrace the hero within.

For fans of Buffy, The X-Men, and Shonen anime/manga.