Character Profile Agent Anderson

Description

Agent Anderson is white and in his early thirties, with light-brown hair and blue eyes. He’s five-ten and 165 pounds. His full name is Thomas Anthony Anderson.

Personality

He has a geeky, raunchy sense of humor and is shy around women. He’s serious about his work and ambitious. When nervous he makes jokes.

Likes

He enjoys reading comics, working out, watching action movies and comedies, and playing video games. His favorite food is Swedish meatballs. He loves a good larger or IPA and is into microbrewery. He’s also a big NCAA basketball fan and tries to go to at least one Penn State game a year. He’s also big into classic rock.

Dislikes

He dislikes paperwork and doing assignments he feels are beneath him. Also, he hates egghead types because they make him feel insecure about his intelligence, and he doesn’t like being condescended to or treated like a kid just because he’s younger than most agents at the DMRC. He also hates how Kyle and the other Metahumans are treated but goes along with it to not rock the boat.

Goals

Agent Anderson’s primary goal is to facilitate the smooth extraction of Subject Prometheus, AKA Travis, and get a big promotion with a nice corner office and pay raise.

Second to this, he wants to find a way to improve the conditions of the Metahumans. However, his goals shift when he meets Travis. He decides to help Travis in the hopes he is the key to saving the other Metahumans.

Desires

As the middle child of five kids, Agent He wants to stand out and be recognized, which is why he accepted the DMRC’s offer to be a handler for metahumans. He wants to be the boss of his division, but he didn’t count on bonding with Kyle, Marie, Echo, and the others.

Now he wants to ensure they’re treated better and eventually allowed to go back to their families. He also wants to settle down and live that picket-fenced suburban life.

Fears

Agent Anderson fears being powerless to prevent the Metahumans from getting hurt, and what Travis is capable now that his powers have reactivated.

Morality/ Religious Beliefs

He is neutral good, doing what is asked of him by superiors, even if he doesn’t agree with them. But he will break the rules when he sees fit. Religiously, he’s a lapsed Catholic, but still says his Hail Marys and Our Fathers when he does or says something bad.

Political Alignment

He considers himself center right and has voted Republican every election since he was 18, though he doesn’t always agree with their platform on things like immigration or foreign policy.

Conclusion

Thanks for reading, Next week’s post will be on Oblivion, The Father of Demons and ultimate incarnation of evil.

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Character Profile Jenny Adams

Description

Jenny is white with hazel eyes, black hair, and large breasts. She is 32, five-foot-eight, and 175 pounds.

Personality

She is fiercely protective of those she cares about, is a big flirt, and takes her job as an RN seriously. She doesn’t mind working hard if the reward is worth it. She’s a bit of a tomboy owing to her having four older brothers. She can be a bit prissy, though. She’s also a hopeless romantic.

Likes

She’s fond of harlequin romances and paranormal romances a la Twilight, and shows like Friends, Gilmore Girls, and Girls.  Her favorite dish is biscuits and gravy, and her favorite drink is Jim Bean whiskey. She likes rom-coms, Korean dramas, and country music.

Dislikes

Jenny hates liars and cheaters and can’t stand people who take advantage of others. She also hates when doctors condescend to her like she’s dumb. She doesn’t like spicy food or take out, preferring to make her own meals. She also hates the attention she receives because of her breasts. She sees red when anyone messes with Travis.

Goals

Long term, Jenny wants to settle down, get married, and start a family. Short term, she wants to become head of St. Michael’s nursing department and use the pay rise to start saving for her wedding. Also, she wants to keep Travis safe no matter the cost to her.

Desires

Jenny desires to love and be loved. Ultimately, she wants to move to the country, buy a plot of land and use it to raise some chickens, rabbits, and goats. She also has dreams of starting her own line of artisanal sausages and cheeses. And she wants to start a free clinic for rural people.

Fears

Jenny fears not being good enough at her job and having to move back to Mobile, AL with her family. She’s also afraid of losing those close to her, especially Travis. And bugs creep her out.

Morality/Religious Beliefs

She is Lawful Good and follows rules even if she doesn’t always agree with them. Religiously, she is Southern Baptist.

Political Alignment

She is a centrist, conservative on some issues like gun control and abortion; and liberal on issues like LGBTQ+ rights, taxes, and freedom of speech.

Conclusion

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A Phoenix First Must Burn

A Phoenix First Must Burn by Patrice Caldwell

My rating: 4 of 5 stars



A Phoenix First Must Burn is an all-female anthology of Black speculative fiction comprised of sixteen stories that range from soldiers fighting space orcs to a girl who discovers she can freeze time.

This anthology remined me a lot of another one, A Universe of Wishes by the We Need Diverse Books organization, and it featured some of the same writers.

Overall, I liked these stories, but my top three favorites are: 3) All The Time in the World by Charlotte Nicole Davis, 2) Letting The Right One In by Patrice Caldwell, and 1) The Goddess Provides by LL McKinney.

All The Time in the World is written in second person POV and you assume the role of Jordan, a Black high schooler who develops time-freezing abilities after years of consuming water contaminated by a local chemical plant, that has hidden this fact until people developed sores, got sick, and died.

Letting The Right One In is a Sapphic romance about a vampire-obsessed Black girl who meets and falls for a Black female vampire.

The Goddess Provides is a high fantasy story about a princess who is hunted down for renouncing the tutelar Goddess after her mother dies suddenly from an illness. This gave me major Children of Blood and Bone vibes and I’m here for it; I’d love to read a novel-length manuscript of this story.

My only criticisms of this anthology are 1) I felt like many of the stories ended without a definitive climax, and 2) the lengths of the stories varied so much, leading to an uneven pace. But these issues weren’t enough to detract from my enjoyment of the book too much.

I give A Phoenix First Must Burn 4.5 out of 5 stars. Read this if you haven’t already!









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Prometheus Character Profile

Description

Pro is identical to Travis, save his lack of burn scars and green eyes instead of brown eyes.

Personality

Pro is cocky, brash, crude, and an all-around fuckboy. While he comes off as dumb, this belies his intelligence when it comes to fighting and fixing mechanical devices and vehicles. He is also impulsive, rarely thinking things through, preferring to go with his gut. 

Likes

Pro likes fast food, hard liquor, and easy women in that order. He also likes fighting and proving he’s the best at it. He a sneakerhead and is a fiend for Jordan’s. His favorite drink is Hennessey straight up paired with hot wings. He’s also free-spirited and loves having fun.

Dislikes

Pro hates being told what to do, especially when it interferes with his having fun. His not a fan of books and would rather watch TV. He also hates indecisiveness and planning things out. But he absolutely hates being stuck with Travis.

Goals

Pro’s number one goal is being rid of Travis. This is second only to him having fun.

Desires

Pro desires freedom and fun, and his greatest desire is being free of Travis

Fears

He fears being controlled and Travis going to the dark side. Also, that he’s too much like Travis.

Morality/ Religious Beliefs

Morally, Pro is Chaotic Good, doing what he feels is right regardless of the law and what society say. Religiously, he is Protestant but doesn’t take his faith seriously.

Political Alignment

Pro is libertarian, believing everyone should be able to do whatever they want.

Conclusion

Thanks for reading. Next week’s post will be on Jenny Adams, the nurse who’s taken care of Travis for years.

Character Profile: JJ Giovanni

Description

Joshua Joseph Giovanni, AKA “JJ” AKA “Josh” is fourteen, but short for his age, standing at four-foot eight- and-a-half inches and barely ninety pounds. He has curly reddish-orange hair, pale skin, china-doll features, and dark green eyes.

Personality

JJ is an ambivert, at home either in the thick of a party, or curled up reading comics. Generally, he’s cocky and crude around his friends, but shy around Travis. He’s secretly a big geek and loves ripping on hella bad sci-fi and horror movies.

He’s also into science and technology and smart in his own right, a fact he hides from most of his friends as he tends to play the class clown. He’s passionate about the causes he cares for, often to the point of obsessiveness. He’s an artist at heart and a hopeless romantic.

Likes

JJ likes crudes jokes, anime, comics, manga, video games, Kaiju, horror, sci-fi, and gangster movies, and writing poetry. He has a sweet tooth and stashes candy bars around his room. His favorite thing to read is online gay romance stories. He also likes edm, pop, alternative and some rap. His drink of choice is a screwdriver. But above all, he loves being the center of attention.

Dislikes

He hates being ignored or talked down to and being underestimated because of his size and age. He also hates how his parents constantly criticize him and put him under a ton of pressure. But most of all, JJ hates being excluded or made to feel like he doesn’t belong.

Goals

JJ just wants to make it to colleg,e so he can cut loose and do his own thing. As for what he wants to do with his life, he’s torn between standup comedy/writing or going into a STEM field to please his parents. Also, he high-key wants Travis to be his boyfriend.

Desires

JJ wants to be loved and valued for who he truly is and to find the guy who will love him unconditionally. He also wants a big family with tons of kids, grandkids, and pets. 

Fears

JJ’s greatest fear is that he isn’t worthy of love and that he’s destined to be alone. Thus, he’ll do whatever it takes to fit in, even if it means doing things he doesn’t agree with, like bullying Travis.

Morality/Religious Beliefs

Morally, JJ is Chaotic Good and will do what he thinks is right regardless of what others and the law says. He is Catholic and attends Mass every Sunday and takes his faith seriously. He believes god has a plan for him and is waiting to figure out what it is.

Political Alignment

Politically, JJ is very liberal, going as far as calling himself a social justice warrior. He tries to keep up with politically correct terms for marginalized groups and donates to several causes such as BLM, the ACLU, and Fight for $15. He also tries to use his privilege for good by engaging in online activism.

Conclusion

Thanks for reading.

Next week’s post will be on be on Pro, the entity with whom Travis shares his mind and body.

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Character Profile: Travis Turner

Description

Travis Marshall Percy-Newton Turner is 12-and-a-half years old, five-two, and 120 pounds. He has tightly coiled curly black hair, with dark brown eyes and skin. The right side of his face and body are covered in burned scars from a fire when he was younger, and he often wears hoodies to hide his face.

Personality

Travis has a dark, sarcastic, geeky sense of humor, and thinks he’s above everyone around him. A know-it-all, he has a massive superiority complex, and hates being viewed as weak or anything but the best at whatever he does. While outwardly stoic, he has anger problems, which becomes his greatest strength and his greatest weakness.

Likes

Travis likes reading books and learning in general, especially if it involves languages, science, or technology. He often takes electronics apart to figure out how they work and has been working on his robot Cha for the past year.

A gamer, he loves fighters, RPG’s, and puzzle/platformers.

He’s also big on gangster movies and bad sci-fi and horror movies.

Music-wise, he likes classical, rap, R&B, soul, Motown, but his favorite genres are Alternative and metal.

Travis also likes order and being in control and as such his room is always clean, with everything labeled and in its place.

When it comes to people, his social circle is small and he only considers Jenny Adams, the nurse who’s taken care of him for years, and his grandmother, Helena Aurum, worthy of his attention and affection.

However, that all changes when he and JJ start hanging out and Travis finds himself falling for the older boy, despite his protestations that love is an evolutionary joke, a trick of chemicals to compel the species to procreate.

Dislikes

He dislikes disorder, messes, surprises, being around a lot of people, and meeting many people at once. Travis also loathes small talk, celebrity and pop culture, stupidity, being vulnerable, and anything that makes him seem weak.

Goals

While still young, Travis knows he wants to do something with technology or electronics, such as becoming an electrical engineer, computer engineer, or programmer. His main goal right now is surviving the hell that is school until he’s old enough to take the GED and go off on his own. But when Oblivion reveals Travis is his vessel, prophesied to end the world, his goal shifts to mastering his powers and stopping the prophecy from coming true.   

Desires

On the surface Travis wants to be normal. But what he desires most is to be accepted for he truly is, to have a place where he can drop his guard and not worry about being strong all the time. Though he says otherwise, he does want friends, to love, and be loved.

Fears

Travis fears emotions and being rejected, so he suppresses the former and pushes everyone away when they get too close. He puts on an act like he doesn’t care what anyone thinks of him. But most of all he fears Oblivion is right about them being the same, and that he has no control over his destiny.

Morality/ Religious Belief

Morally speaking, Travis is Chaotic Neutral, following his own set of rules with little regard to whether his actions are good or evil, so long as they achieve his goals.

Religiously, he’s an atheist, staunch materialist, and Secular Humanist who believes this is the only world that exists and the only life we get, so we should make the best of it for ourselves and others.

Political Alignment

Raised in a working-class neighborhood, Travis leans liberal, believing the state has a role to play in government, but it shouldn’t be the answer to everything. And in general, it should keep its nose out of people’s business and let them do whatever they want if it doesn’t harm anyone.

Conclusion

Thank you for reading this post. Next week’s post will explore JJ’s background.

Review: Counting Down with You

Counting Down with You by Tashie Bhuiyan

My rating: 4 of 5 stars


Counting Down with You by Tashie Bhuiyan is a YA romance that deals with anxiety disorders and filial piety. Seventeen-year-old Karina Myra Ahmed tries to live up to her Bangladeshi parents’ high expectations, but she feels suffocated under all their rules, so when they take a month-long trip to Bangladesh, she decides to use their absence to cut loose.

Things are complicated when she’s forced to tutor bad-boy Alistair “Ace” Clyde, and he asks her to fake date him for three weeks. They catch feelings for each other and in the process learn to fight for themselves and what they want.

It took me a while to get into this book, but I’m glad I stuck with it; Ace and Karina are adorable together, and I was so rooting for them. But the other characters were a bit one-note, and I couldn’t stand her parents. They are the definition of toxic parents, and I wouldn’t blame Karina if she cuts contact with them once she goes to college.

Overall, I like this book, but it did have some issues. First, the overuse of adverbs led to a lot of telling. I’m talking at least once every page. That said, it didn’t detract from the story that much.

Second, as I mentioned above, aside from Ace and Karina, the characters were two-dimensional. But my favorite character Karina’s grandmother; she was so warm and understanding, like a comfy blanket.

My third issue was that neither Ace nor Karina grew a spine until after they got together. This is a pet peeve of mine; if you don’t care enough about yourself to fight for what you want, then why would you just because you’re in a relationship?

The ending was also a bit lackluster with the issue of whether Karina will tell her parents about Ace being left unresolved.

I did enjoy Karina’s poems and the build up of her relationship with Ace.

Overall, I give Counting Down with You 4.0 out of 5.0 stars and recommend it if you like diverse YA romances.




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Arcade Attack

Introduction

Welcome!

In this post I’ll talk about how video games have influenced me and the writing of Palingenesis, my dark fantasy/sci-fi debut YA novel, which releases September 1st.

Without further ado.

As a kid, I spent more time in the hospital than I did at home, fighting one respiratory infection after another. I also had asthma so severe I could only ride my bike up and down my block a few times before getting winded. So, video games became my thing and helped me cope with the isolation.

And since I had latest systems and games, our house was the go-to spot for  in our neighborhood. I sucked at most sports games, and still do, but could wreck most kids in fighting games, especially Street Fighter and Mortal Kombat.

I vividly remember I and the other kids in the neighborhood trying to figure out all the death moves while politicians debated over said graphic violence and whether it would lead to violence in real life.

Spoiler alert: it didn’t.

To this day, I’m extremely shy; but gaming helped me socialize. Even if it was a “sup?”, “hey” or “Mortal Kombat?” it got me to interact with kids and form friendships.

My cousin, brother, and I would game after school, and then I’d meet their friends and we’d trade games or have tournaments. Mind you, this was in the late ‘90s, so there was no online gaming yet.

Another fond memory of gaming I have is when we went to visit my mother’s family in northern Michigan, and I demolished my cousin Ryan in Tekken my first time playing it.

Things changed once broadband internet became popular in the early 2000s

Online Gaming

 Now that I wasn’t limited to the gamers in my neighborhood, I could have matches against people half-a-world away any time.

I liked the solo aspect of first-person shooters, but when I started playing MMORPGs like Matrix Online, and later Maple Story and World of Warcraft (WOW), it forced me to interact with people more as many of the missions required two or more players.

Then I discovered kongregate.com, a site where people could play and create games for others while socializing in chatrooms. I got to know several users over the years by frequenting the same chatrooms.

But I also learned that games are more than mere playthings; they can be art and teach you about storytelling at the same time.

Games as Teachers of Writing and Life

Games like God of War, WOW, Heavy Rain, and The Last of Us provide a cinematic experience.

In each case, the gameplay is complemented with a griping story.

 In the case of God of War, it’s spawned an ongoing franchise that’s due to the detail of its storytelling. From the opening sequence of the first game, with its somber narration, you know you’re in for a hell of a game. And with each sequel the lore and world is expanded.

Likewise, The Last of Us literally pulls you into the story by having you assume control of Joel during the opening level of the game. And the levels are designed such that you feel your characters anxiety when they crouch for cover to avoid enemies.

Moreover, Heavy Rain does this as well by putting you in control of Ethan Mars as he tries to locate his kidnapped son through a series of character interactions and puzzles that are structured like an interactive movie.

WOW also pulls you in from the start with a huge cinematic cutscene explaining the lore of the world.

Lesson 1: Engage Readers Immediately

One lesson I took from these games is to engage readers from the start. Backstory can wait. Make readers care about your protagonist and their world by making them wonder what happens next.

Lesson 2: The Stakes Must Matter

Another lesson these games taught me is to keep upping the tension and rewards, so people stay engaged. In each case, the enemies get harder and the amount of experience points to level up increases, but so do the power-ups and abilities.

For writing, I took this to mean making readers’ time worthwhile by giving them a story that’s both fun, raises the stakes, and doesn’t waste their time.

Lesson 3: Make the Experience Seamless

Another lesson I learned is to make the experience enjoyable. One of the things I hate about games is when the story rocks but the gameplay sucks or vice versa, ruining the experience.

The corollary in writing, then, is making sure your prose is readable, lively, and free of typos and grammatical errors, so readers aren’t jerked from the story by having to parse clunky sentences.

Lesson 4: Think Outside the Box

Games have also taught me how to improvise, adapt, and overcome issues. Often in games you must figure out puzzles or how to defeat a boss with little to no hints, and in games like Dark Souls and Bloodborne, they are notoriously difficult to beat.

But it can be done and the critical thinking and problem-solving skills these games and others require lend themselves well to writing, especially when it comes to fixing plot holes. There have been times I didn’t know how to fix a story, but by sticking with it and talking it out with myself, I solved the problem.

Lesson 5: View Stories as RPG’s

Four related traits from Role-Playing Games (RPG’s) that influence Palingenesis are nerfing, skill trees, cool down, and mana points.

I’ll discuss each in turn.

Nerfing refers to when the developers reduce the power of a class, skill, or item because it’s too powerful and breaks the game. As this applies to my story,when Travis exhausts his energy (mana points) he loses access to all his abilities until his energy has recharged by either eating or sleeping. And then his powered are weakened until his battery fully charges.

During this cool down period, he’s vulnerable and can be killed by standard weapons.

Like In WOW, all of Travis’s abilities use a specific amount of energy or mana points and he can’t use them without the exact amount of energy available, so he has to budget his energy.

Skill trees refer to the branching paths a player can unlock as their level increases. Generally, the farther down the skill tree, the more powerful the ability and the more skill points it costs.

Similarly, Travis’s powers start small (for him) and then increase as he grows stronger.

 To prevent him from being powerful enough to “break” the story, I created Zeno’s Battery, a paradox which states that the more powerful he becomes the larger his “battery” becomes and the longer his cool down period, meaning the cost for exhausting his energy becomes greater as time goes on.  

Lesson 6: Never Surrender

But the greatest lesson games have taught is to be perseverant. Many games require trial and error, especially those released before the internet and IGN were a thing. So, you had to figure things out by yourself, experimenting and refining your tactics until you beat the boss.

Writing is all about perseverance. Completing your first draft is just the first step to publication and you’ll need a second, third or more drafts to get your story right.

 Then there’s querying (if you got the traditional route) or hiring an editor and cover designer if you go the self-publishing route. In either case, you’re expected to do all the marketing for your book.         

Conclusion

Games have existed almost as long as storytelling, and the two have merged creating a new art form that can teach us much about life and being human, and it’s my hope the lessons they’ve taught me helped me make a kickass book for you.

Next week’s post will begin a series of character profiles, starting with Travis.

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And if you play Pokemon GO, my trainer code is: 4907 7550 5331

Life in the Mitten

Introduction

Welcome back. This post will deal with the setting of Palingenesis, namely life in Azure Plains, Michigan.

Michigan

Like many midwestern states, Michigan leans conservative and is a perennial swing state. However, large cities like Detroit and Ann Arbor are more liberal, and in the case of Ferndale, it’s very LGBTQ+ friendly.

But race relations have a long history of problems, be it cities that are highly segregated to this day, white flight from the inner city to the suburbs and country, and white supremacist activity in the state. As a general rule the farther from the metro-Detroit area you get, the less diverse and more conservative people get.

Weather

Given our proximity to Canada and the Great Lakes, Michigan is prone to wild weather swings; you can experience winter-link snowstorms in the morning, Spring showers in the afternoon, and sweltering Summer heat in the evening. Weather is often localized to the point that you drive through storms. And certain parts of the upper peninsula can get snow year-round. Tornados are also common, and every Michigander knows to go into their basement/lowest level of their house when a tornado watch is issued. We also know to prepare for prolonged power outages during the summer and winter months.

 All of which has prompted the saying, “If you don’t like the weather, wait five minutes.  

Traditions

Michigan is home to several annual traditions, such as going to cider mills every fall for hayrides, cider, and doughnuts; Traverse City’s cherry festival every July; and Motor City Pride every June. Detroit and Windsor also put on a joint firework display for the International Freedom Festival, an annual multi-day festival celebrating Canada Day and the Fourth of July. There’s also the annual jazz and techno festivals, and the Detroit Hoedown for country music fans. And every August classic cars parade along Woodward Avenue for the Woodward Dream Cruise.    

Food

Michigan is home to several immigrant populations, so we have a variety of foods to choose from. Hit up Hamtramck for Polish food. Craving middle eastern cuisine, then pop over to Dearborn and Dearborn Heights, home the country’s largest population of Middle Eastern folks.

Being majority black, Detroit is great for soul food and traditional American dishes like burgers, and you have to try our deep-dish pizza. You’ll also find Greek, Italian, Chinese, and Indian restaurants scattered across the Metro-Detroit areas. Uou’ll also find poutine and New York style delis.  

Overall, Travis Likes his home state, but not so much his city.

Azure Plains

Azure Plains, Michigan is a fictional Detroit suburb, and is an amalgamation of several such suburbs I’ve visited over the years. Like many Michigan suburbs, it’s segregated, with the well-to-do living on the east side of town in gated communities, while the working-poor and middle class live on the west side of town. Much as Eight Mile Road is the physical and psychological border separating Detroit from the northern suburbs, Woodward Avenue bisects Azure Plains into the haves and the have-nots. Travis’s neighborhood is on the edge of this border and Woodward Avenue runs right behind his two-story house.

The mayor of Azure Plains, Jasonda Pride, has been in office for two decades, largely from the wealthy side of town supporting her financially, allow her to crush anyone foolish enough to challenge her. All decisions about the town are made by a committee of concerned citizens, which is code for rich, bored housewives.

The city has a business district downtown, and the stores are a mix of boutiques, cafes, artisanal sandwich shops, and bars. And every year they have an art festival/ food festival called the Hardy Arty Party in the days leading up to The Woodward Dream Cruise. And for every major holiday they allow local children to decorate the shop fronts.

Every Christmas the local shops donate money to buy needy children toys, and every Halloween they pass out candy to kids as the business district turns into the Scream District, a massive, haunted house.   

Travis and others without cars get around via the SMART bus system and DDOT system, which connects Azure Plains to Flint to the northernmost, and downtown Detroit to the southernmost.  

Children in Azure Plains have few options for schools. The working class send their kids to Don Barton Elementary, Thurgood Marshall Middle School, and MLK Highschool. The rich send their children to Azure Plains Preparatory Academy, a K-12 charter school.

AP Prep

AP Prep, or APPA as the cool kids call it, is a multi-wing school sat on three acres of land. It has its own stadium for football, field hockey, lacrosse, and soccer matches, along with a regulation gym for basketball, wrestling, volleyball, and other indoor sports. While academics are preached about daily, Travis sees how the teachers fawn over athletes, and is infuriated when they get to set the curve.

The uniform at AP Prep is simple: A school blazer, dress shirt with optional tie, dress pants or khakis, with dress shoes. The uniforms alone often price out most people on Travis’s side of town. And even those who can afford them can’t pay the fees AP Prep charges for every little thing. And as such, Travis is one of twenty BIPOC students at the school.

The courses at AP Prep are on par with those taught at private schools, and the teachers are the best of the bunch, recruited in much the same way prospects for college sports are. As such, AP Prep’s graduation rate is 98% and their students have a college graduation rate of 85%

The teachers are hard on the students, save those on sports teams, and expect only the best from them. Of course, Travis thinks this is a load of crap, since he’s witnessed teachers “bump up” grades after said student’s parents donate to the school’s many extracurricular activities. The hypocrisy of it all is vomit inducing.  

Conclusion

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Palingenesis Cover Reveal

Welcome back!

Today’s post is a special one. After over a decade working off and on Palingenesis, I am proud to present the cover for it.

I’ve poured my heart and soul into this book and can’t wait for y’all to read it when it releases in September.

For the unaware, Palingenesis is the first in a YA dark fantasy/sci-fi series about a bullied Black boy who learns he’s evil’s chosen one and must fight the devil to protect the boy and world he loves.

Without further ado here’s the cover.

cover by Rocko Spigolon via reedsy.com

Here’s the blurb:

Hell has no fury like a seventh-grader scorned.

Twelve-year-old Travis Turner fought the devil and won . . . barely. But evil never dies, and now he must master his supernatural abilities before Oblivion grows strong enough to defeat him and jumpstart the apocalypse.

However, Travis’s powers cause genome instability, leaving him only months to live if it’s not reversed.

He’s resigned to dying, until JJ Giovanni, the cocky redhead who’s bullies him for years, befriends him.

As their relationship intensifies, so do Travis’s powers, until he’s called to a cave, where he learns truths that forever change him.

To save the people he loves, the world and himself, Travis must let go of all he knows and embrace the hero within.

For fans of Buffy, The X-Men, and Shonen anime/manga.

The Science Behind the Fiction Part 2

Introduction

Welcome to part two of the post on the science used in The Phoenix Diaries. Without further ado, let’s begin.

The Science

Astrobiology

Astrobiology deals with whether life on other planets exist, and if so, how it may have evolved and how humans can detect it. It makes use of several different sciences such as molecular biology, biochemistry, biophysics, chemistry, astronomy, geology, and exoplanetology to determine where life may be present. I use astrobiology to theorize how alien lifeforms might evolve and how their environments affect their biology.

For example, the Nekoshin home world has heavy gravity, so they tend to be muscular, squat, stronger, and faster than humans. Conversely, The Hebin from planet Drac’con tend to be very tall relative to humans, owing to Drac’con’s lower gravity.

Xeno-linguistics

Xeno-linguistics is the theoretical study of alien languages using standard linguistic techniques and concepts. I employ this in the series through the creation of alien languages such as Na’iva and Na’el, which Travis and Prometheus learn in Palingenesis. In later books more alien languages are introduced such as Omnivox, a lingua franca used among the various alien cultures.

Xeno-technology

Likewise, xeno-technology is the study of alien technology, which is a major plot point later in the series as Travis hatches a plan to reverse-engineer all the alien technology he encounters on his adventures and introduce them to Earth. Such technology includes fusion generators, molecular printers, and teleportation pads.

Telepathy

Telepathy is usually considered in the realm of fantasy, but there’s a scientific explanation for how it could work. The theory goes something like this: brain waves being a collection of electrical impulses, these impulses can be transmitted to another’s brain, assuming you’re on the right “frequency.” The technology to do this would require precise knowledge of the human nervous system and brain, so we don’t fry the receiver’s and sender’s mind in the process.

Travis and Prometheus, being part energy creature, are able to modulate their brain waves to tune to others’ minds, and receive others’ thoughts, much as one dialing in a radio station.    

Telekinesis

Similar to telepathy, telekinesis would work by harnessing the power of our brain waves. This would require equipping the objects we want to move with receivers that trigger motors in the objects. Scientists have been experimenting with such technology to help quadriplegics control tablets via their thoughts, and others have used brain implants to allow people to move a robotic arm via their thoughts.

   In this case of Travis and Prometheus, they use the electromagnetic field generated by their brain waves to affect the atmospheric pressure around them and use that to push objects.

Elemental Control

Matter and energy are basically the same thing, per Einstein’s General Theory of Relativity, thus if you control one, you control the other. Furthermore, by controlling matter at a subatomic, one can create, water, fire, and the other elements and manipulate them with various forces.

 Therefore, Travis and Prometheus can control the elements due to their control of energy. And fire being a chemical reaction that produces energy in the form of heat, is the element they have greatest control over.  

Rapid Healing

 The rate at which a person heals from an injury depends on age, general health, rest, and nutrition. Generally speaking, the older and sicker you are, the longer it takes you to heal. The healing process is governing by a set of biological processes which all require energy and the right about of organic chemistry to work.

 The way rapid healing works in Palingenesis is Travis is able to speed up this process by focusing his energy onto the task of healing himself. However, doing this requires a ton of energy and Travis’s powers are nerfed afterward, rendering him vulnerable during this recharge period.  

Molecular Printers

Molecular printers are a take on 3-d printers, only they print items molecule by molecule. How such a device would work is by using fusion generators as their power source, then you could either put raw materials in them and have the machine transform the atomic structure into the item you want, or in more advanced models the molecular printer would create the item whole cloth from pure energy a la the replicators from Star Trek.

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You can do this because per superstring theory, all matter and energy are just strings vibrating at different frequencies.  

The molecular printer Travis first encounters is of the former type.

Gravity Amplifiers

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Similarly, gravity can be amplified using the same technology to vibrate strings at the frequencies to create gravitons and produce localized gravitational fields, like the one Travis and Prometheus use to train with.

Currently, the only way to simulate the effects of gravity is via rotation of large objects, and such a method is used on the International Space Station.  

Hologram-Trainer

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 Holograms are creations of light, specifically they are created when two beams of light of the same wavelength intersect with a two- or three-dimensional picture.

Because light is just another form of energy, the hologram-trainer is able to create holograms of any object you could conceive of, with the benefit of making them solid. So, for all intents and purposes, the holograms it produces are real and can kill you.

Travis and Prometheus make uses of this machine during their training in the Magova (|mah| |goh| |vah| cave) and afterward to keep their skills sharp.

Conclusion

I hope you’ve enjoyed this deep dive into the science behind the fiction. For more information about astronomy and astrophysics check out Neil deGrass Tyson and Derrick Pitts.

Next week’s blog will be my cover reveal.

The Science Behind the Fiction Part 1

Introduction

Welcome back!

 This week and next week’s blogpost will cover the science used in the series. Science fiction and science fact have always influenced each other. Things we take for granted today, like smartphones, tablets, and the internet were once only in the realm of fiction. In fact, science fiction and science often push each other to new limits.

Case in point, the concept of geostationary satellites, which scientists use to collect data on the earth’s atmosphere and telecoms use to transfer data, were popularized by sci-fi author Arthur C. Clarke in his 1945 paper, Extra-Terrestrial Relays – Can Rocket Stations Give Worldwide Radio Coverage?

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 Moreover, sci-fi author Jules Verne predicted humans would land on the moon decades before the Apollo Program succeeded in doing so. He also predicted submarines, the juke box and hologram, and the existence of giant squids. George Orwell also predicted facial recognition software, speech-to-text devices, and AI technology that could create books and music. In each case, what started as science fiction became reality.

In a similar way, I’ve tried to take existing science and technology and extrapolate how they could be used.  

The Science of Palingenesis

Superstring and M-Theory

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Superstring theory and M-Theory posit that instead of the four dimensions we learned in school (length, width, depth, and time) there are other dimensions parallel to ours. Specifically, superstring theory says that the smallest units of energy and matter are strings, one-dimensional objects, whose vibrations give rise to the graviton and other elementary particles. There were five theories of superstring theory, each with a different set of mathematical equations governing them, until 1995 when physicist Edward Witten unified them in M-theory. However, M-theory requires the existence of eleven dimensions.

How this applies to my series is M-theory leads to the existence of infinite dimensions, not just the eleven it predicts. This in turn leads to the existence of a multiverse in Palingenesis, one such dimension being Pandemonium, which Travis travels to at the end of the book.  

Quantum Entanglement

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Quantum Entanglement in simplest terms is the phenomenon wherein two particles on the quantum level, separated by a distance X influence each other. For example, if you change the position of momentum of one, it changes those of the other. How this applies to The Phoenix Diaries is that Travis and Prometheus can change into beings of pure energy, and thus the laws of quantum mechanics apply, and they are quantum entangled, allowing one to find the other no matter where in the universe they are.

Einstein’s Theories of Special and General Relativity

Most of us are familiar with E=mc2 and know it as Einstein’s theory of relativity. But this is in accurate. Einstein had two theories of relativity. His special theory of relativity is the one that uses his famous equation and deals with the behavior of physics in different reference frames, relativistic (traveling near the speed of light), and nonrelativistic (everyday speeds much less than the speed of light).

As a consequence of this theory time isn’t constant and you get time dilation where events appear to happen differently based on the reference frame you’re in.

The example Einstein gave was two bolts of lightning striking the ends of a train car. Do they strike at the same time? The answer depends on where in the train (your reference frame) you are. If you’re closer to one end you observe that end being struck first, followed by the other end being struck.

How this plays into The Phoenix Diaries is that time in other dimensions is different (time dilation) such that a day in one dimension could be a month or longer in another dimension. Something Travis must account for when dimension hopping.

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Now Einstein’s Special Theory of Relativity deals with space and time, uniting them in the famous space-time continuum. According to this theory space and time are like a fabric and it’s the warping of this fabric by mass that causes gravity and given a dense enough mass this fabric can be puncture. Such a puncture is called a black hole, which Einstein also predicted.  

However, it’s the equation E=mc2 that we’re concerned with right now. Per this equation, half of all the food Travis and Prometheus eat gets converted directly to energy; it’s this energy which fuels all their abilities.

They are essentially walking nuclear fusion reactors, a plot point which comes up in later books.

Black Holes and Wormholes

As a mentioned above, black holes are created when a superdense mass rips a hole in the space-time continuum. This most often happens when stars exhaust their fuel and go supernova, or as a natural part of galaxy formation.

 Scientists have found proof that a supermassive black hole is at the center of every large galaxy, including our own Milky Way.

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The gravity created by black holes is so strong that even light can’t escape them, and anything that falls into a black hole will be crushed to a singularity (infinitely tiny particles) and the laws of time and space cease to exist.

However, all is not lost as some black holes have an exit.

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These are called wormholes and their existence has been hypothesized due to a special solution of the Einstein field equation. Worm holes are basically tunnels linking one point in space-time with another, similar to the technology used in the movie Stargate. Travis and Prometheus use wormholes to teleport and dimension hop.     

Teleportation

The science behind teleportation involves quantum mechanics. On the quantum level if you give a particle inside a box enough energy, it is able to “tunnel” through the box. This is known as quantum tunneling and scientists have used it to teleport information between photons, electrons, atoms, and superconductors. However, teleportation of larger objects like humans remains science fiction.

Teleportation in The Phoenix Diaries comes in three varieties: (1) through wormholes as I described above, (2) through advanced alien technology that coverts the user into pure energy that is then sent through an internet of teleportation pads, and (3) via magic. The second and third methods will be explored in the second book in the series.  

Information Theory

Information theory studies the transmission, processing, extraction, and utilization of information. Abstractly, information can be thought of as the resolution of uncertainty. One of the issues with information theory is where it concerns black holes.

Mathematically, all data that enters a block hole should be lost, compressed to a singularity. This results in the Black Hole Information Paradox. One proposed solution to this paradox is that the information is retained on the outside of the black hole.  It’s such a solution I take advantage of in my series. When Travis and Prometheus teleport, all their information remains on the outside of the wormhole, then travels along it, where it is then reassembled. And as nod to this, they gain the memories of the other whenever they merged.  

Conclusion

Thanks for reading, and if you liked it, please tell your friends and share it on social media. For more information on the topics covered today, check out nasa.gov, popularmechanics.com, and mkaku.org (the homepage of theoretical physicist Dr. Michio Kaku).

A Tour of the Multiverse: The Worldbuilding of Palingenesis

Introduction

Welcome back. This week I’ll be tackling the elements that went into the world building of Palingenesis.

As kid I was a loner, and the library was my refuge; In seventh grade I got big into mythology, starting with the Greek myths, then moved on to Norse and Egyptian mythology.

During this time I was also big into video games, anime, comics, and sci-fi/fantasy shows like Buffy, Charmed, and  Star Trek: The Next Generation. All of this shaped the worldbuilding of Palingenesis, as I will explain.

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The Strength That Endures: Symbols in Palingenesis

Introduction

Welcome back.

 In this post I’ll be exploring symbols and their use within the world of Palingenesis. But what is a symbol?

The Merriam-Webster Dictionary defines a symbol as: something that stands for or suggests something else by reason of relationship, association, convention, or accidental resemblance, especially :  a visible sign of something invisible. Familiar examples of such symbols are the cross, Star of David, and the star and crescent.

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